Opening two chapters in Destiny novel


#1

Hi all, I’m currently writing a fan fiction novel set in the Destiny universe, which will hopefully grow in scope to become a fully fledged series.

I posted the first draft of the opening chapter on here awhile ago, I have since revised that chapter so here is the second draft, as well as chapter 2 which I only finished writing very recently. Both positive and negative feedback is welcome.

Chapter One - Awakenings.

Chapter Two - A Wolf In Sheep’s Clothing.

Thanks, SN.


#2

Good read, keep it up the work, your story is turning out really good!!


#3

This sounds really good! Im guessing the main character is awoken in a human settlement, and is the round ball in his pocket an inside of a ghost? Please write more :slight_smile: